I have a positive, affirming approach to editing, bringing to your attention the phrases, descriptions and sections which are highly effective in harnessing your reader's interest and drawing him/her in.

    For fifteen to twenty minutes I will read and comment on your work for free. This will provide the opportunity: 

       1) For me to see if I am suited for your piece, and 
       2) For you to experience my comments and feedback and see if you find them helpful. 

    If we consider ourselves a match we can proceed.
    Affordable.

    I look forward to hearing from you to answer your questions and provide references.

    Carol Keeffe 
    808-990-1153 Manuscript? . . . it will read like a breeze Are you writing a novel, non-fiction book, article or some other important piece?

Would you like it to be even more compelling and reader-friendly? Helping You Express Your Thoughts Your writing will:

• read with increased flow.
• have even better transitions.
• become even more intriguing and compelling for the reader.

You will:

• meet your goals more precisely.
• feel more confident about your abilities.
• grow in trust of your unique way of expressing.  Besides being a wonderful editor,  you are very intuitive person. I'm really grateful for your help, words, support and encouragement. Every email from you is like unwrapping a gift box full of good things inside.        — Adriana


   How can I thank you! You catch things that I’ve read over dozens of times but never noticed and are so intuitive regarding sections that need either more or less.                                                     — Sally


The manuscript arrived, great insights on the book, you are an angel.  —  A.S.


Got the other four chapters, wow, a lot to chew over, will start working on it next week. You are gifted! I resist the changes but they are really great.  —  Patti Testimonials "It's hard for me to read a book and keep interested in it but I have to admit this is one book I woke up with and went to bed with. I enjoyed every minute of it."     - Tina M.

"I just finished reading your book--was so engrossed in it, I missed my subway stop! I am grateful for your supportive, encouraging and practical approach."     - Laney M.

 "I just completed your book "How To Get...Money You Already Have". I actually read while watching the Mariner playoff games. If you knew what a big M's fan I am, you would understand how much I enjoyed your book."     - Susan R

"I bought a copy of your book because I couldn't stand to take it back to the library! I skim through sections of your book almost daily as part of a ritual to keep myself motivated. I loaned it to my mother to read and now we are fighting over who keeps it. When she is done, I hope my sister will read it.      - Andrea F.
 
What Reader’s Say about author Carol Keeffe’s writing in her book,
How to Get What You Want in Life with the Money You Already Have
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